The start was such a interesting touch for immersion, like I could already see and understand many of the emotions running through some of characters mind. Looking forward to the update!
OKAY HOLD ON CAUSE THIS IS SO GOOD? IM LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE <33 , IF IM BEING 100% HONEST RN, TOWARDS THE END OF THE FIRST CHAPTER I ALMOST STARTED CRYING, THE WRITING IS SO AMAZING!
Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm so pleased my writing was able to achieve that kind of emotional response for you, that's the highest of praise! Thank you for telling me, and I'm very excited to share more of the story in the future!
Ah, I'm tearing up a little at this compliment... It genuinely means so much to me that so many of you think this IF is well done so far!! I'm the sole developer/writer, and I always feel like I have no idea what I'm doing, but words like these are a great comfort to me as I work on this game. Thank you!
im really loving everything so far (no surprise considering i was keeping up with the dashingdon demo too before lmao), especially my beloved kaine<3 im also super excited to meet the other characters, so i cant wait for any and all updates to this!! (no pressure of course, take ur time!!)
i love the demo so far but i did have a bug while playing, idk if its because im doing it on a macbook or on the safari browser? basically every single time i clicked anywhere this error message would pop up. i could still play the game to the end of the demo, but this message would appear so frequently that it would break the immersion completely (and just be a bit annoying, especially on the hair colour options because it appeared everytime i clicked on them</3). hopefully it isnt something thats hard to resolve! ill leave a pic of the error message below.
anyways, i really do love the game so far and im especially looking forward to meeting milo<3 wishing u all the best!
Thank you for following my little game project for so long, I appreciate it so much! Also, the error message is much appreciated in a bug report, so thank you for that as well!
From what I understand, the code that is erroring is a function in my games Javascript, but it doesn't seem to do this in other browsers... My best guess is you are using an older version of Safari, maybe, because from what my internet sleuthing tells me, Safari now supports that specific Javascript function as of March of this year. Could you try updating your browser and let me know if the error continues?
hi, tysm for ur reply! i did have to do all the macbook updates that i had been procrastinating downloading, but that did solve my issue completely, i got no more error messages at all. im so sorry for thinking it was a bug in the game! and thank u so much for ur help, i really appreciate it. wishing u and the project all the best! <3
Please don't worry about it at all, I'm sorry for making you update your macbook to make my silly little game work!! I'm glad we managed to fix it for you, though, and thank you for the best wishes!! <3
Really good so far! Love all the options and characters shown and I'm excited for what's to come~ Just letting you know that the save button wasn't working for me i'm not sure if anyone else has had that problem too (i'm running it on the itchio app on my windows pc if that helps)
Thank you! And I've just searched issues with saves on the itch.io app, it sounds like the app blocks the pop-up that's supposed to let you name your save file, making it not work... I'll have to add a way around that. Unless you meant it wasn't working in a different way, which if so, please let me know!
Thank you so much! Graphic design is a little bit of a hobby of mine (though I'm very new to coding CSS), but I really wanted to make nice visuals to deliver the story with, so I'm glad you think I succeeded!
Are you going to make this android compatible? Right now it forces you into landscape and cuts off the bottom of the screen on Android for mobile phones.
I'm really sorry, but the current version doesn't support mobile well. Additionally, this game is not being developed with mobile particularly in mind, as when it's complete I would hopefully like to publish it as a PC game in executable form.
I'm really glad, because I have a lot planned! And thank you, it was actually originally meant to just be a placeholder title, but it really just stuck, so I kept it in the long run!
I have loved this story since it was first released in Choicescript and am glad to see it still being worked on. Can't wait for this demo to reach and get past all that was previously available!
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Can't wait for further update so good:3
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The start was such a interesting touch for immersion, like I could already see and understand many of the emotions running through some of characters mind. Looking forward to the update!
Ahh yes, a new Interactive fiction. Looking forward to it :)
This was great can’t wait for more
OKAY HOLD ON CAUSE THIS IS SO GOOD? IM LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE IN THE FUTURE <33 , IF IM BEING 100% HONEST RN, TOWARDS THE END OF THE FIRST CHAPTER I ALMOST STARTED CRYING, THE WRITING IS SO AMAZING!
Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm so pleased my writing was able to achieve that kind of emotional response for you, that's the highest of praise! Thank you for telling me, and I'm very excited to share more of the story in the future!
This is an amazing IF. I'm excited to see what else you have planned.
Ah, I'm tearing up a little at this compliment... It genuinely means so much to me that so many of you think this IF is well done so far!! I'm the sole developer/writer, and I always feel like I have no idea what I'm doing, but words like these are a great comfort to me as I work on this game. Thank you!
Loved seeing the full chapter 1 here!
Cannot wait for more!
Nice to see you here again, Blasphemer!! I'm so happy you liked the full first chapter, and I'm very excited to share more of the story as well!
I love love this one so much, I cannot wait to read more about the story and the characters, you did amazing!
I'm going to cry happy tears, aww! This means the world to me, thank you so much!
im really loving everything so far (no surprise considering i was keeping up with the dashingdon demo too before lmao), especially my beloved kaine<3 im also super excited to meet the other characters, so i cant wait for any and all updates to this!! (no pressure of course, take ur time!!)
i love the demo so far but i did have a bug while playing, idk if its because im doing it on a macbook or on the safari browser? basically every single time i clicked anywhere this error message would pop up. i could still play the game to the end of the demo, but this message would appear so frequently that it would break the immersion completely (and just be a bit annoying, especially on the hair colour options because it appeared everytime i clicked on them</3). hopefully it isnt something thats hard to resolve! ill leave a pic of the error message below.
anyways, i really do love the game so far and im especially looking forward to meeting milo<3 wishing u all the best!
Thank you for following my little game project for so long, I appreciate it so much! Also, the error message is much appreciated in a bug report, so thank you for that as well!
From what I understand, the code that is erroring is a function in my games Javascript, but it doesn't seem to do this in other browsers... My best guess is you are using an older version of Safari, maybe, because from what my internet sleuthing tells me, Safari now supports that specific Javascript function as of March of this year. Could you try updating your browser and let me know if the error continues?
hi, tysm for ur reply! i did have to do all the macbook updates that i had been procrastinating downloading, but that did solve my issue completely, i got no more error messages at all. im so sorry for thinking it was a bug in the game! and thank u so much for ur help, i really appreciate it. wishing u and the project all the best! <3
Please don't worry about it at all, I'm sorry for making you update your macbook to make my silly little game work!! I'm glad we managed to fix it for you, though, and thank you for the best wishes!! <3
This is so good!! Really immersive can't wait for more <3333
I'm super late responding to this, but thank you so much! I'm really glad it's successfully immersive! <3
Really good so far! Love all the options and characters shown and I'm excited for what's to come~ Just letting you know that the save button wasn't working for me i'm not sure if anyone else has had that problem too (i'm running it on the itchio app on my windows pc if that helps)
Thank you! And I've just searched issues with saves on the itch.io app, it sounds like the app blocks the pop-up that's supposed to let you name your save file, making it not work... I'll have to add a way around that. Unless you meant it wasn't working in a different way, which if so, please let me know!
Beautiful graphics. The story is also nice but I mostly love the whole aesthetic to the game. 10/10! Fantastic job author! ^^
Thank you so much! Graphic design is a little bit of a hobby of mine (though I'm very new to coding CSS), but I really wanted to make nice visuals to deliver the story with, so I'm glad you think I succeeded!
Are you going to make this android compatible? Right now it forces you into landscape and cuts off the bottom of the screen on Android for mobile phones.
I'm really sorry, but the current version doesn't support mobile well. Additionally, this game is not being developed with mobile particularly in mind, as when it's complete I would hopefully like to publish it as a PC game in executable form.
Curious to see where this goes. Good title by the way. Catches the eye and should be fairly easy to remember.
I'm really glad, because I have a lot planned! And thank you, it was actually originally meant to just be a placeholder title, but it really just stuck, so I kept it in the long run!
I have loved this story since it was first released in Choicescript and am glad to see it still being worked on. Can't wait for this demo to reach and get past all that was previously available!
That means so much to me!! Thank you for following my silly little story! <3